Showing posts with label Buffy. Show all posts
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Sunday, October 20, 2013

Sexy Badboys or Good Looking Scumbags?




                When it comes to storytelling, you will rarely find anything truly new under the sun.  Once you allow for the changing language and styles and times, you will find that most of the characters in fiction have existed in various forms for thousands of years. The last century gave rise to something sort of new though. In the past the lines between good and evil were pretty clearly defined.  You could tell the good guys from the bad pretty easily by the way they acted and the things they did. There was a belief that if you worked hard, lived a good and moral life, did right by your family and community that everything would be alright, that the good would prosper, and the evil would be punished.  Then we had the Civil War, brothers fighting brothers, then reconstruction, World War I and the Spanish Flu epidemic, Millions dead. Then the Great Depression…there came a point when people just couldn’t hold on to that belief anymore against the mountain of evidence to the contrary? When you lose that surety how do you know right from wrong anymore? Bank robbers are bad guys,by definition, but how do you feel when the Bank just took your home, about the guy who took the Banks stuff? This gave rise to the various “folk hero” bandits like Bonny and Clyde and John Dillinger.  Maybe the first of what might be considered “Sexy Bad Boys” (and Bonny)

                So that’s the back story. But how do you write a …good..sexy bad boy and not just a good looking scumbag? Because there is a difference. I have a theory about that. We all learned about the competing theories of nurture and nature in child development in High School.  I think of it like this; a person’s nature is like Spring Steel. It has a form that it always wants to return to.  His “Nurture” is the force that attempts to hold the spring steel of a person’s nature to a form. When a person’s nurture aligns with his nature you will see a very strong and pure expression of who that person is. A good “Sexy Bad Boy” character is one who is a good person by nature, perhaps twisted to bad by his upbringing or environment, but with something inside of him actively seeks to return to good.  His story arc will be the process of forcing back the influence of his nurture so that more of his nature can assert itself, probably with the help of the good guys.

                Take Spike from Buffy the Vampire Slayer for instance. Before he was turned he was a decent enough guy if maybe a bit milquetoast. He took care of his mother, wrote poetry, and wanted to fit in. When he was turned into a vampire, he lost his soul and went on a 200 year killing spree, because well, Vampire, but even as a vampire, he wasn’t like the others who all seemed bent on ushering in the apocalypse.  Unlike Angelus, he had sympathetic aspects to his personality He was a caring and attentive boyfriend to Drusilla, he liked Manchester United and the Clash. After he got chipped so he couldn’t hurt humans he started hanging out with the Scooby’s, and more of his good nature started to show through. He protected Dawn. He brought flowers when Joyce died.  He fought on their side against Glory when he didn’t have to.  He still did plenty of bad stuff too, but for a guy without a soul he was pretty ok. When he got his soul and got past the whole first evil thing he became a pretty Stalwart hero. But he still had that bad boy edginess to him that the girls like.

      Now look at Prince Joffrey from Game of Thrones. Good Looking Scumbag. His nature is evil. He is a Sadistic, Cowardly, Arrogant Bully. That’s his nature. His upbringing was being ignored by his “father” and doted on and spoiled by his mother.  There were social restraints on him for a time, but his innate cruelty was always trying to get out. Once he became king he indulged it on every occasion. He was never going to be a good person. Not with the love of a good woman, or time to mature, or with the responsibilities of Fatherhood.  His nature would always be trying to force its way back to bad. As opposed to Tyrion Lannister whose good nature asserts itself through a largely cruel upbringing. 

                For writers I would suggest taking a honest appraisal of a characters nature. What do his past actions tell you about him? Let go of the idea that being handsome or wealthy or capable of tossing off snarky dialogue forgives all sins. People do not really change their natures; maybe a handful in a million, they only conform for a time to the pressures placed upon them. If you are determined to write fanfiction about one of these bad boy characters then you need to go back and work in some indicators that they have within them a good nature. And try not to be a Sansa.



Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Blinding the God's Eye View



As fans we know an awful lot about the books, movies and television shows that we love. We know every scene and every point of view.  We get to see everything from the big picture down to the smallest details. We watched the deleted scenes and read the interviews with the writers and cast. The perspective we have on these stories must be a little like God sees the world.  All that inside knowledge we have informs the way we write the characters.  Something very interesting can happen though when a writer lets go of all that hard won knowledge and deliberately writes from the perspective of a true outsider.  You get a fresh look at characters that are as familiar to us as old friends.  Within canon, we know who everyone is, what their motivations are and what really happened in the story and why. All of that is not readily apparent to the outsider.

         I always use Harry Potter as an example, so this time I’ll go Batman.  Suppose my normal wheelhouse was mystery focused stories rooted in Batman’s skill as a detective mixed in with a little slice of life Batman family stuff, relationship with Alfred, maybe a hint of sultry femme fatale Selina Kyle romance, and so on, but I’m blocked on my latest murder thriller and want to explore some different aspect about what it is to be Batman.  So I start a new story from the point of view of an entirely new character, unrelated to the Batman Mythology.  Jennifer Kolwalski is a 32 year old assistant council in the public defender’s office in Gotham City. Her husband is a supply officer in the navy on extended deployment in Pacific. She has never really had a firsthand encounter with the craziness that happens in Gotham. Never been kidnapped by the Joker, never been gassed with fear toxin. She had to take the bus to work that one month when Twoface had bombed the subway and the tunnel was being shored up. She does however work the Batman desk in her office.

        Last year her boss put the moves on her at the New Year’s Eve party, and she’d shut him down. Two weeks later she’d been assigned to defend the first of many clients put into the system by Batman. She didn’t get the Riddler, she got the guy who drove the Riddler to the Gotham National Bank then got knocked out by a steel boomerang to the face. The Batman desk was the kiss of death for a career in Law. Not only was Batman meticulous about providing the police with evidence and coerced confessions, but there was a stigma attached to being arrested by Batman.  To juries, if Batman beat somebody up, he must have been doing something wrong.  Anytime she could plea bargain a charge down a step or two she counted it a win.  She’d been doing this long enough that she was starting to get repeat customers. Sure some of them were scum but others were just guys taking any work they could get and where did Batman get off knocking them around like he did? Poor Jerry was going to need surgery to fix that shoulder. Any police officer that tried to get information from a prisoner like that would have been thrown off the force, and the case dismissed out of hand.  The system wasn’t perfect, but there were rules, and Batman thought he was above them.  She had tried to argue that once, that Batman wasn’t a duly deputized officer of the law and his vigilante actions had no legal standing but the Judges always seemed to make exceptions just like the juries.

          So that’s where she’s coming from. The story doesn’t really get going until she comes home late from another hard day of work to find a badly wounded Batman lying on her living room floor in a puddle of blood and a couple of dirty cops on the mob payroll searching apartment to apartment looking for him.  Should she hide him? Turn him in? Unmask him? Ask him why he does what he does? She has her assumptions about him, but she doesn’t know Bruce Wayne as anything but a name. She doesn’t know his history anything about his family.  He’s made her life hard, but he’s also a wounded human being in need of help being hunted by killers. There are a lot of places to go with this, and they aren’t bound by what I know about Batman.

Wow, that ran kind of long. Let me give you an example of a very good fan fiction that did an excellent job of keeping that outsiders perspective.  The story is from the Buffy the Vampire Slayer fandom and is told from the perspective of a member of Watchers Council.  It was inspired by “The Heart of Darkness” by Joseph Conrad and concerns Xander’s time in Africa after the Hell mouth was closed. Most of the characters are original and richly developed, and the author painted a very detailed and interesting picture of Africa, specifically Mali. It's really one of my favorite stories from the Buffyverse. It's called "Facing the Heart in Darkness" by Liz_Marcs

http://www.livejournal.com/tools/memories.bml?user=liz_marcs&keyword=Africander+Fic-A-Thon&filter=all